Me, Myself, and I
If I could be who I truly wanted to be
It would be someone who was more focused
Someone who speaks without hesitation
Someone who would not care about others’ opinions
Someone who could go for anything without ever holding back.
Life
Everyone has different opinions about everything, different views, and different ways of going through life.
In this life, I want to gain the feeling of success,
of feeling as if I accomplished something I could never dream of
the feeling of complete and udder satisfaction
That is what I want from life.
Who am I?
Well for starters I’m a tad quiet on occasion, but I can be loud and vociferous if I want to be
I’m sarcastic and indecisive, what a great combo I’ve been told (just kidding, no one would ever say or believe that statement)
I am a person, who is not very good at making decisions, including how to end this poem.
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I LOVE how you ended your poem–it’s perfect. And I also appreciate the thought that “the quietest people have the loudest minds.”
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Hey, Caitlin! I love how you set up this intro-to-you. It was more unique than any of the others I have read. You managed to slip in a bit of humor after mentioning that you’re sarcastic and I think that was a great addition. Your last sentence was also a great way to end this piece!
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This poem is very well written and I love the structure. It was surprisingly humorous and thoughtful. I really like the use of the word vociferous, I thought it was a great addition. My favorite line is the is the last line because it really describes who you are as a person.
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Caitlin,
I really enjoyed this poem! I think the first stanza is something most people could relate to. I love love loved the ending of this poem as well. It is witty and shows a lot of personality. I can’t wait to read more in the future!
Sydney
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Caitlin, I like your unique approach to this topic. I would have never thought to separate it in this way. It was interesting to get to learn about your life, as well as see your humor come in. I liked how you described who you would be in an ideal world versus how you believe you are.
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Wow! What a cool way to go about your blog; I love poetry. Your feelings in “Me, Myself, and I” are relatable and honest. I appreciate your authenticity. I also love your final sentence of “Who am I?”; it make me chuckle. Keep up the creativity!
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I really like this post! I think it is super interesting how you structured it. This is new and unique and I think its super cool. I really like how you let your creativity run with this post. I also think its cool how you really open up and talk about yourself deeper than just a basic layer. This is a really good.
– Jonah Dill
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Hey Caitlin, I really liked your poem. It was structured uniquely but at the same time I could really relate to it. You should continue writing because you are very talented. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.
– Peter
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I love how you addressed the things you seek from life and also who you already are. The ending to this piece added a nice sense of humor that strengthens the purpose of this piece. Great job!
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